XatoMoreover, the city is big. Furthermore, it is crowded. In addition, it is expensive.
To'g'riThe city is big, crowded and expensive.
Uch bog'lovchi o'rniga bitta sodda gap yaxshiroq va tabiiyroq.
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Grammatika
Bog'lovchilar va matn bog'liqligi
Coherence and Cohesion bog'lovchilar sonini emas, fikr oqimini baholaydi.
Nega bu ballga ta'sir qiladi
Band descriptor'da «bog'lovchilarni haddan ortiq yoki mexanik ishlatish» alohida kamchilik sifatida yozilgan. Har gapda «Moreover» turgan insho 6 dan yuqoriga chiqmaydi.
Qoida
- 1Bir xatboshiga bitta bog'lovchi odatda yetarli; qolgan bog'liqlik olmosh va takrorlanuvchi kalit so'zlar orqali beriladi.
- 2Ma'nosiga qarab tanlang: however — zidlik, therefore — natija, for instance — misol.
- 3«However» bog'lovchi emas: undan keyin vergul qo'yiladi va yangi gap boshlanadi.
Xato va to'g'ri variant
XatoHowever the cost is high, the benefit is bigger.
To'g'riAlthough the cost is high, the benefit is bigger.
Zidlikni bitta gap ichida bermoqchi bo'lsangiz «although» ishlating.
XatoIn conclusion to sum up, governments should act now.
To'g'riIn conclusion, governments should act now.
Ikki xulosa iborasini birga qo'yish — takror, bittasi yetarli.
Yozgandan keyin tekshiring
- Bog'lovchilarni olib tashlasangiz, matn baribir mantiqiy oqadimi?
- «However» dan keyin vergul turibdimi?
- Bir xatboshida bir xil bog'lovchi takrorlanmaganmi?
Mashq
Har bir savolga bitta javob tanlang — to'g'ri javob va qoida darhol ko'rinadi. Natija saqlanmaydi.
1.The course is expensive. , most students say it is worth the money.
2.The roads were closed by snow. , many people arrived late.
3.Some jobs are easy to automate. , supermarkets now need far fewer cashiers.
4.Which sentence is punctuated correctly?
5.Many cities have built bike lanes. Which second sentence links best?
6.Many young people cannot afford a flat. , they live with their parents for longer.
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